Ergoth from MapleStory

by Roland
(California)

Ergoth

This picture is inspired by an online game called MapleStory. It's a boss called Ergoth. I'd like some constructive critisism please! Enjoy!
(BTW. This is my first submission, and Jeff, this website is great, thanks for making it for an aspiring artist! xD!) Lastly the writing got cut off a bit..Sorry 'bout that guys!

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Ergoth from MapleStory

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Nov 04, 2009
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Maple Story
by: Jeff

Hi Roland - love the drawing.

I took a look at what Ergoth looks like, and I'd say you've got a pretty close likeness here. It would be neat to see him colored too - red cloak, red gem - and all!

Your penciled lines indicate you've got a nice grasp on things.

A tip, the dark area in and around his skull can make the hood to appear to be floating over his head. I think if you bring the cloak down to be touching his head in some areas, it would be easier to see that it's sitting on his skull. Just a thought!

By the way - ever played Kart Rider? Like Maple Story - this game is SUPER popular in South Korea.

Jeff :-)

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